I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
On dress up day my dad made me a superstar outfit for school he used my old cardboard house he used paint and some stickers to match my top they were stars it was the be dress up day ever
Kia ora! I'm Lola and I see that you told us about your dress up day! I liked how you told us what you were wearing, but maybe you could tell us more about what happened on your dress up day. Also, you had some spelling mistakes so maybe you could go back and fix that up! Hope I get to see more blog posts from you!
Kia Ora, my name is Maia I am from Belfast School. I like the way you told us who made your outfit and what was needed for it. This made me wonder what it looked like. Maybe next time you could add some photos and work on your punctuation. Maia
Kia ora! I'm Lola and I see that you told us about your dress up day! I liked how you told us what you were wearing, but maybe you could tell us more about what happened on your dress up day. Also, you had some spelling mistakes so maybe you could go back and fix that up! Hope I get to see more blog posts from you!
Kia Ora, im Mayci Your dress up day sounds fun. maybe you could add more detail to your blog and add a photo but I like the way you told us how you made your outfit.Go check out my blog https://bssmaycileighm.blogspot.com/
Kia ora! I'm Lola and I see that you told us about your dress up day! I liked how you told us what you were wearing, but maybe you could tell us more about what happened on your dress up day. Also, you had some spelling mistakes so maybe you could go back and fix that up! Hope I get to see more blog posts from you!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, my name is Maia I am from Belfast School.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you told us who made your outfit and what was needed for it.
This made me wonder what it looked like.
Maybe next time you could add some photos and work on your punctuation.
Maia
Kia ora! I'm Lola and I see that you told us about your dress up day! I liked how you told us what you were wearing, but maybe you could tell us more about what happened on your dress up day. Also, you had some spelling mistakes so maybe you could go back and fix that up! Hope I get to see more blog posts from you!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, im Mayci Your dress up day sounds fun. maybe you could add more detail to your blog and add a photo but I like the way you told us how you made your outfit.Go check out my blog https://bssmaycileighm.blogspot.com/
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